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I feel my emotions die
As I watch the color of your eyes fade out
Just like the light in your heart-which was extinguished despite my attempts to keep it alive
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I purposely stopped breathing just to save more oxygen for the flame…
despite my pleas to stay here.. 
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:iconnightshade-keyblade:
nightshade-keyblade Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
A hero's nightmare, in more eloquent terms.
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:iconmetarukitsune:
MetaruKitsune Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep... I suppose so. 
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:iconnightshade-keyblade:
nightshade-keyblade Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
But people like you are a better alternative to a world so cold
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MetaruKitsune Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw.. :backhug: 
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19andMugsy Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I purposely stopped breathing just to save more oxygen for the flame…

What a line! Very re-mark-able. 
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:iconmetarukitsune:
MetaruKitsune Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for taking the time to read && comment! :heart: I'm glad you enjoyed~
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19andMugsy Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
very welcome, you are :)  
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
We can't always save the ones we love... :(
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:iconmetarukitsune:
MetaruKitsune Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I suppose not.. 
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
Yeah... :(
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